Home

Previous Entry | Next Entry

revise/reprise

  • Jun. 19th, 2008 at 6:08 PM
twiggy
"What are you doing over the break?" one of my students asked me. (She's writing a screenplay about vampires).

"Revising," I told her.

She smirked. "Really?"

"Yeah. Just like class."

Only now it's just me and my agent's notes. I flip through page after page and squint at her handwriting. "Huh?" she'll scribble in the margins. "Not clear."

When my head needs clearing, I hop on my bike and cruise. The royal poinciana trees have smeared the sidewalks with their lava-colored blossoms. I cruise over the Chinese Bridge, down to the People's Dock.

"Beware of Alligators," reads a sign tagged with crablike graffiti. It's low tide and the air smells like rain. When I peer over the water, I spot a pair of puffer fish nosing through the seaweed.

I turn and head back toward the road. As I hit the brakes, a truck swerves around me and parks in the dirt. A boy in a Marlins hat jumps out. He sets a metal cage on the ground, slides open the trapdoor, and a possum waddles into a thicket of ferns.

Once in a while, I'll spot a guy in pleated shorts and a golf shirt, practicing the bag pipes (it sounds like a flock of geese slowly dying). Or the middle-aged man who performs tai chi in the grass. Or the box turtle who nibbles dandelion weeds (I always think of him as Tea Biscuit, my childhood pet who ran...or crawled...away. I haven't seen him since the brushfire a month ago. I hope he scooted off with the peacocks). Someday I'll write about these mental postcards. For now, I'm taking notes in my head.

I haven't bonded with my bike in ages, thanks to the rain. Instead of daydreaming on my wheels, I hid inside a movie theatre. I caught a stunning film that my students have been drooling over. It's called The Fall and it's a story about storytelling...the way we recreate events in our minds and how every person sees it from a different angle.

A little girl listens to a bedside fable and creates a fantastical world in her imagination, at times pausing to correct the details ("He doesn't talk like that!") or casting real life people in her fictional universe. The narrative skillfully weaves between the adult and child's perspective of key events, allowing the audience to play along as they connect the threads.

As I watched, wide-eyed, I couldn't help thinking, "Isn't this just like writing...or reading...a book?"

Watch the trailer here


Comments

( 10 comments — Leave a comment )
[info]annamlewis wrote:
Jun. 20th, 2008 01:09 am (UTC)
Ohhhhh, sounds like a fantastic movie.
I bet my 16YO daughter would love it. When we're out, she's always adding more to her fantasy novel... triggered by strange things!
Thanks!!!
[info]crissachappell wrote:
Jun. 20th, 2008 01:40 am (UTC)
When I was bittersweet sixteen, I was obsessed with writing my own fantasy novel (elves, swords, castles, you get the picture). I'd scribble notes during algebra class and I always got in trouble for drawing the scenes instead of paying attention to x = y or whatever.

I hope your daughter saves all her printed pages!
[info]annamlewis wrote:
Jun. 20th, 2008 01:47 am (UTC)
She loved her AP European History class because she was "learning things to put in her book". I think the novel is about 1/2 finished and last year she even did an amazing trailer! Gotta love her!
[info]crissachappell wrote:
Jun. 20th, 2008 01:51 am (UTC)
That rocks!

I remember learning about prefixes and suffixes in English class and jotting notes (thinking: these could make interesting character names). And yeah...they helped with the SATS (couldn't save my math score! LOL)

Your daughter must take after you!!!!!
[info]annamlewis wrote:
Jun. 20th, 2008 02:05 am (UTC)
Awwww, Thanks!

She said the other day to me that maybe she doesn't want to write because... "she doesn't want to have to make a speech when she wins the Newbery". Silly girl!
She's right above me in her room signing and playing her guitar... to a song she wrote. It's been going on for about an hour now. Too funny!
[info]crissachappell wrote:
Jun. 20th, 2008 02:28 am (UTC)
She's got confidence! I love it!

I hope she keeps singing her songs/writing her stories/dreaming her dreams...for years to come.
[info]daffodil_duck wrote:
Jun. 20th, 2008 05:47 am (UTC)
Trailers...
When did trailers get so long? They give away so much. Looks like a beautiful movie but I feel like I've just seen it. Thanks for sharing your day with us :-)
[info]crissachappell wrote:
Jun. 20th, 2008 12:06 pm (UTC)
Re: Trailers...
I know what you mean! But trust me....this trailer didn't reveal too much (there are more narratives than one!)
[info]m_stiefvater wrote:
Jun. 22nd, 2008 08:04 pm (UTC)
I just love your choice of music!
[info]crissachappell wrote:
Jun. 22nd, 2008 08:07 pm (UTC)
Thank you!!! I live and breathe it!
( 10 comments — Leave a comment )

Latest Month

October 2009
S M T W T F S
    123
45678910
11121314151617
18192021222324
25262728293031
Powered by LiveJournal.com
Designed by Tiffany Chow